PBDS 623.185
Poetry
Workshop
NOTE: This is representative of the syllabi for this
course. It is not necessarily the syllabus being used in any one semester.
purpose:
In this course you will read and write poetry.
You will learn how to critique poems in a weekly workshop, become a better
reader of poetry, and develop techniques and sensibilities that will lead you
closer to finding your poetic voice.
texts:
The Discovery of Poetry, by Frances Mayes
+ at least one book of poetry by a poet of your
choice
requirements:
a final portfolio of original work revised from
weekly assignments (include workshop draft and revision)
attendance at at least one poetry reading and a
one page response
completion of a journal/commonplace book (one
filled notebook)
written journal responses to 5 poetry books
included in journal
memorization of three poems
grading:
Your grade will be based on the quality of your
final portfolio, your participation in class, and your completion of all
requirements. It is important that you bring your poems to class on time and
photocopied,whether or not you are satisfied with them. Take advantage of the
deadline each week. Missing two or more classes can lower your grade. Extreme
lateness (30 minutes) or leaving early counts as half an absence. Please feel
free to come by before or after class to talk about your writing. I also urge
you to exchange work with writers in the class. In a class such as this,
sitting down with one person privately can be some of the most valuable time
spent. (I am available for short and long conferences,even 10 minutes before
class to look at a poem, and hope you will come by and see me at least once
this term.)
"I want to write, but more than that, I want
to bring out all kinds of things buried in my heart.".
--Anne Frank
the plan
(subject to
change according to the heat of the moment)
"Poetry is prose with an
attitude."
--B.C. comic strip
week 1
Course
Intro
week 2
Given First
Line Poem
in your
journal: select
three poems you like from your reading assignment and copy (or photocopy) them
into your journal. Why did you choose the poem? What did you like about it? The
subject? The words? The shape? The voice? What surprised you? Make notes in
your journal.
Readings:
Invitation and Chapter 3.
"Gloire De Dijon" p. 66
"What the Dog Perhaps Hears" p. 67
"Nantucket" p. 73
"Traveling Through the Dark"p. 75
"Facing It" p.104
"Fog Horn" p. 125
"University of Iowa Hospital" p. 126
"The Best Days" p. 128
"A Partial Explanation" p. 142
"Between Walls" p. 256
"Heat" p. 258
"In A Station At The Metro" p. 259
"Snow" p. 274
"Alba" p. 351
"Image" p. 447
"Poem" p. 277
week 3
Response
Poem
*** for the
response poem, select any poem you want from the anthology, then write a
response to that poem. You response can be in any form--that is, you don't
necessarily need to imitate the style or form of the poem. What you do need to
do is engage with it in some way--rebut it, argue with it, admire it, satirize
it, mimic it, parody it, write a "prequel" or sequel to it, address the writer
directly, or use any other strategy you wish to respond to the poem.
in your
journal: copy at
least 10 terrific images you found in your reading (this week's or last) and
come to class prepared to shine your light on them. If you are inclined,
copy,or photocopy,all or parts of poems.
Readings:
"Blades" p. 269
"Starlight" p. 275
"Inkfish" p. 343
"In the Waiting Room" p. 421
"Autobiographia Literaria" p. 141
"Nani" p. 155
"My Papa's Waltz" p. 24
week 4
Childhood
Memory Poem/Five Senses
from Mayes:
"Write about a symbolic object from childhood: a ruby your aunt wore in the
hollow of her throat, a pistol in
your father's bedside table, your mother's stack of yellowed love
letters in the hall closet, a set of trains you loved∞"
or any
other suggestions on pages 465-467 that involve childhood memory.
in your
journal: copy at
least 5 great metaphors from your reading.
Readings:
pages 380-386 and:
"A Blessing" p. 2
"The Fish" p. 53
"Words" p. 62
"Today" p. 62
"Study of Two Pears" p. 78
"Body Poems" p. 106
"Fork" p. 127
"Cat and Weather" p. 276
"Blackberrying" p. 280
"Thirteen Ways of Looking at a
Blackbird" p. 281
"To a Watch at Night" p. 383
"Poppies" p. 341
"A Smart Dithyramb" p.
"What would happen if one woman
told the truth about her life?
The world would split open."
--Muriel Rukeyser
week 5
Object Poem
Workshop
in your
journal: make a
list of objects/subjects in your journal you might like to write about. . .
consider food, things on your dresser, in your medicine chest, your closet,
your purse, your backpack, then pick one and write a poem about it.
Handout
"The true mystery of the world is
the visible, not the invisible."
--Oscar Wilde
week 6
Voice
Imitation Poem
Read a book
by a contemporary poet and write a poem that imitates the poet's style. Type up
your poem along with 3 poems by the poet. Type his or her name at the bottom of
each poem, including the one that is actually yours. Make 5 copies for your
workshop group. In class, we will try to guess which poem is the imitation.
in your
journal: make notes
about what you observe
to be part
of the poet's style.
Readings:
pages 177-206 and:
"Saying Things" p. 27
"Free Union" p. 418
"Marin Headlands" p. 337
"Living" p. 335
week 7
Repetition
Poem
Also, bring
journals into class for a check up. Your journals should include poems you have copied, poems
of your own you have started, daily entries, things you observe, dreams,
questions∞quotes∞
Readings:
"Long Range Patrol" p. 277
"A Father at a Son's Baptism" p. 18
"The Mother" p. 398
"The Negress" p. 135
"The Elder Sister: p. 262
Handout
"In a dark time, the eye begins
to see."
--Theodore Roethke
week 8
Persona
Poem
Write a
poem in the voice of someone else,historical, contemporary, familial,
Choose
someone whose story you want to tell.
Think about
the tone.
Readings:
"Resemblance" p. 151
"Deaf Poem" p. 333
"Tulips" p.
week 9
Scary Poem
Write about
something that scares or scared you.
Handout
week 10
Free Choice
Poem
Pages
300-312; 318-322
Handout
"Form is a fulfillment of desir."
--Kenneth
Burke
week 11
Formal
Poem
Bring
journals in for check up.
Recite
"Jabberwocky" (p 25 ) from memory!
week 12
Experimental
Poem
Bring
magazines, newspapers, scissors, and tape.
"Sell your cleverness and buy
bewilderment.".
--Jalal
Rumi
week 13
The Gentle
Art of Revision
Bring 3
poems you wrote this semester that you want to work on. Print out fresh copies,
and make one of them double-spaced. Bring at least one poem you think
stinks.
week 14
Free Choice
Poem
This is the
poem you have been avoiding writing, the one that is yanking at your ear,
tugging at your sleeve, the one that wants to come out but you are ignoring it
because you think it will be too dangerous, too mean, too funny, too trite, too
something.
week 15
PORTFOLIOS
DUE (a collection of all the poems you have written this semester, revised,
including copies of workshop drafts, plus a one page poetry reading response)
OPEN MIC
READING!!!
"I love deadlines. I love to hear
the sound of them rushing past. "
--Anon.