PBDS.626
LITERARY NONFICTION
NOTE: This is representative of the syllabi for this
course. It is not necessarily the syllabus being used in any one semester.
Experimentation in writing various kinds of
nonfiction, including personal essays, travel essays, humor, profiles, memoirs.
Focus is on the use of literary techniques within the context of the form's
traditions and contemporary innovations.
Writers
such as Jan Morris, Tom Wolfe, John McPhee, E.B. White, Norman Mailer, Tracy
Kidder, Joan Didion, Calvin Trillin, James Agee and S.J. Perelman will be
contrasted and compared. Each student will make a class presentation regarding
these (or other) writers and each student will write about ten assignments
throughout the semester. Editing other's work, as well editing your own, will
also be stressed.
We'll
be learning skills, approaches, strategies to writing non-fiction. Less
emphasis will be placed on bald facts, knowledge or ideas. This will be an
excursion into self and into discipline and into the limits of style and form
and its appropriateness for each of us. Start-to-finish in this course, the
emphasis will be on the act of
writing; on developing critical and analytical skills; on understanding the
purpose and structure and design of specific forms of writing.
Everything
will be in the service of the writing. If everything works out, nothing will be extraneous to the writing since writing
doesn't occur in a vacuum, a void, or a narcissistic black hole fueled by ego,
impulse or vanity.
Hopefully,
you'll leave this course with an enhanced appreciation for the possibilities
and power of literary nonfiction -- and for what you bring to it. You may also
be better able to tolerate the confusion, uncertainty, ambivalence and fear
that are an inescapable part of serious writing.
REQUIRED READING
There will be many, many
handouts.
RECOMMENDED READING (as well as recommended additions to your library):
•
Literary Journalism, edited by Norman Sims and Mark Kramer. Ballantine
Books, 1995.
•
Elements of Style by William Strunk and E.B. White. Allyn & Bacon,
2000.
•
On Writing Well by William Zinsser. HarperCollins, 1998.
•
Writers at Work: The
Paris Review Interviews, edited by
George Plimpton. Viking Press. A multi-volume series of interviews with such
writers as James Thurber, William Faulkner, Henry Miller, Norman Mailer, Allen
Ginsberg, John Updike, Joseph Heller, Kurt Vonnegut on the "guts" of their
writing -- how they write, why they write, their daily struggles with writing,
etc.
Every week, try to read:
•
"Talk of the Town" or a
longer article/essay in The New Yorker.
•
The Washington Post's
"Style" Section
•
If you come across
interesting, well-written articles in these or other publications, please bring
them in for class discussion and let me know at the beginning of the class that
you have something to discuss.
WRITING ASSIGNMENTS
Keep
a writer's notebook. A three-ring
binder may work best for this. For each week of the class, write in your notebook two to three ideas that you'd like to develop as articles or even
as books. Each idea should include: the slant you'd take when writing the
article or book, what pulls you toward this idea, how you'd approach the topic,
how you'd research it. Keep your entries in this notebook brief. I will collect the notebooks on Nov. 11. Grades for
the journals will pivot on the creativity, imagination, effort and ambition of
your ideas.
The
note is not class notes. It is ideas --your ideas-- and primarily for your
personal use. Do not be overly
concerned with neatness. Your entries can be done in handwriting or with a word
processor or on an old typewriter you found in a junkyard. What's important is
1) entries be neat enough so I can read them; 2) you not spend more time
addressing legibility than you do addressing creativity. (On the other hand,
don't be too tempted by illegibility. After all, I do have to read them.)
Other
than the notebook, writing assignments will be given in the number of desired
words. The length of an assignment is not arbitrary, although it is somewhat
flexible. For a 1,500-word assignment, for example, you don't have to hit that
magic number right on the button. On the other hand, don't skimp and write
1,000 words. And don't write a bloated 2,000 words. A general rule of thumb is
that going over or under an assigned length by 150-200 words is dandy. Anything
excessively above or below that number will be a problem.
Assignments
have specific lengths to give you a feel for a form of writing, for the
discipline involved in it, for your own proclivity for -- and comfort in --
that style. Don't be seduced by the numbers! The compression necessary when
writing a 500-word essay may be as difficult as the discipline and/or research
and/or thinking demanded when taking a 2,500-word essay to full length. Maybe
more difficult.
Assignments should be double-spaced in 12-point
characters. Always use one-inch margins and indent paragraphs. Do not have an
extra space between paragraphs. Those extra spaces disrupt the reading process,
turn each paragraph into an isolated island of its own and interrupt the flow
of meaning and effect.
REVISIONS
Every
writing assignment (except the writer's notebook) can be revised twice. The grade for the latest revision will replace
previous grades received for that assignment.
No revision will be accepted unless all previous
versions of that assignment are stapled to it.
Only two assignments will receive separate grades for the
original version and the revised version: the essay on awareness and the last
assignment of the semester -- the 1,500 word article.
ORAL PRESENTATIONS
Starting
around the fifth week of the course, each student will make a 30- minute
presentation about the books and authors you have focused on. You can read
either two (or more) books by one author or one (or more) books by two authors.
You can compare authors, styles, structure, topics, careers, etc. The overall
purpose is to qualify how close any of these writers or books come to
"literature," how far they push the envelope of non-fiction, and how successful
they are at doing this.
Below
are suggested books/authors. If there are other books and authors you'd like to
read, please ask me to approve them:
Ota: The Pygmy in the Zoo -- Harvey Blume
Joe DiMaggio: The Hero's
Life -- Richard Ben Cramer
Long Quiet Highway -- Natalie Goldberg
Writing Down the Bones -- Natalie Goldberg
Patrimony -- Philip Roth
Growing Up -- Russell Baker
Total Loss Farm -- Raymond Mungo
The Soul of a New Machine -- Tracy Kidder
The Perfect Storm -- Sebastian Junger
Into Thin Air -- Jon Krakauer
Let Us Now Praise Famous
Men -- James Agee
A Walker in Jerusalem -- Samuel Heilman
Coming into the Country -- John McPhee
The John McPhee Reader -- edited by William Howarth
Holy Days -- Lis Harris
French Lessons -- Alice Kaplan
In Cold Blood -- Truman Capote
The Right Stuff -- Tom Wolfe
Miami and the Siege of
Chicago -- Norman Mailer
The Steps of the Pentagon -- Norman Mailer
Of a Fire on the Moon -- Norman Mailer
Out of Africa -- Isak Deniesen
The White Album -- Joan Didion
Uncivil Liberties -- Calvin Trillin
Alice, Let's Eat -- Calvin Trillin
GRADING
Grades will be given on every
writing assignment:
F -- for work that does not
satisfy in any way the course
requirements and/or the graduate level of this course.
C-, C, C+ -- for work that
barely satisfies the course requirements and/or the graduate level of this
course.
B-, B, B+ -- good, solid,
commendable work.
A-, A -- work so
accomplished, so polished, so skilled that an editor receiving it would
immediately shriek "Eureka!" and sprint down the hall to brag to
colleagues that another Hemingway, Wolfe, Mailer, Capote, McPhee has just been
discovered.
There
is no final exam
.
Grades
received for your writing assignments will account for 65 percent of your final
grade; your oral presentation will account for 20 percent; class participation
and attendance will account for 15 percent. Also influencing the final grade
will be your progress and improvement as a writer and as a thinker about
writing since the beginning of the semester.
Class
participation is not class attendance. "Attendance" means bodily and
(hopefully) mentally present from the beginning to the end of each class.
"Participation" means you are contributing to the class with comments,
insights, readings you have discovered on your own, yelps of revelation, groans
of dismay, holy/transcendent/beatific visions. (But please: NO speaking in
tongues.)
Any
assignment not turned in during the class when it is due will lose half a
letter grade. Assignments more than one week late will lose a full letter
grade.
No
assignment can be e-mailed to me.
Excessive
and repeated tardiness will adversely affect your grade, as will more than two
absences.
PLAGIARISM:
It is illegal and unethical to use someone else's work
without properly crediting the source. If you are not sure whether to credit a
source or to quote or paraphrase or use original language, please ask me in
advance -- or err on the side of citing the source you are using. If I discover
you've plagiarized material for this course, I will follow the university's
policy of academic integrity. (See the UB Student handbook for this policy.)
Under that policy, the consequences of plagiarism can include failing the
course and being expelled from the university.
OFFICE HOURS
My office #, phone # and
e-mail address are in the top left corner of the first page of this syllabus.
I'll be in my office from 7-8 p.m. on Monday and Tuesday. I'll accommodate any
student who wants to meet with me, but an appointment is advisable. Please call
or e-mail to schedule a meeting.
If a before- or after-class meeting is inconvenient for you, I'll try to
adjust my schedule -- within reason -- so we can meet at another time.
THE WEEKS
AHEAD.............
Note: This is a rough overview of the semester. Readings, writing
assignments, and class discussions may change as the semester proceeds.
Week 1: Sept. 9
Get acquainted; general lay
of the land; writing and reading assignments for Week #3
Week 2: Sept. 16
NO CLASS -- YOM KIPPUR
Week 3: Sept. 23
READING: "Breakable
Rules for Literary Journalists" by Mark Kramer, and either Tracy Kidder, "Memory," OR John McPhee,
"Atchafalaya."
DUE: two 500-word assignments.
Assignment
#1: a newspaper-style article about Week #1, with the traditional, objective
stance toward writing and the five indispensable elements of journalism -- who,
what, where, why, when.
Assignment#2: Also write about
Week #1, but use any of the elements of literary nonfiction. How you write this
piece can be personal, critical (of yourself, your classmates, your
teacher, your university, etc.),
reflective, bemused, indignant, etc. You choose the style, the tone, the
content, the direction, but it must -- however explicitly or obliquely --
address Week #1.
Week 4: Sept. 30
READING: Handouts:
selections by E.B. White and from Natalie Goldberg's Long Quiet Highway.
DUE: 750-word
essay on being aware. Of what? Of
anything. Of sitting as you write. Of the muscles you use -- or don't use -- as
you write. Of thinking as you write. Of the flow of your thoughts: their
rising, falling, fading away. Of
the scratch of your pen on paper or the pounding of your keyboard as you bang
away. Of the birds or kids or traffic outside your window. Of the silence outside
your window if you live in the country. Of your resistance to this assignment
even as you plow ahead with this assignment because you know you have to do this damn assignment.
As
you write, remember these lines from Natalie Goldberg's Long Quiet Highway: "The deepest thing writing taught me was that there
was nothing to hold on to. Thoughts moved quickly. As a writer, I worked hard
to grasp them as they flooded through me, but thoughts moved faster than my
hand..... A writer's life is about examination. What is love, anyway, and sorrow and light? I wasn't ready
to examine these things for their own sake. I was busy examining myself. How do
I get this mind to speak clearly, how do I coordinate it with my hand and pen,
who is a writer, how do I become one?... [At author's readings, I found out
that everyone] wrote differently and had a different schedule. That was great!
It gave me permission to find my own way. It encouraged me to examine myself.
Who was I anyway, who was going to write?"
Week 5: Oct. 7
READING: Susan Orlean, "The
American Man at Age 10."
DUE: 750-word
profile. Can be about anyone -- a relative, a friend, an acquaintance, someone
you just met, someone you go out of your way to meet. Things to keep in mind:
what makes them unique? what draws you to them? what repels you by them? what
do they evoke in you? what do you think you evoke in them? Describe their
appearance, their clothing, the way they walk, the rhythm/cadence/pacing of
their speech, if they use words in a certain way and how. Do you want to
analyze that speech pattern -- or just "report" it? It's your choice.
Week 6: Oct. 14
Reading: TBA/several
essays.
DUE: 750-word
essay on topic of your choice. Make it elegant, graceful, fluid, insightful,
penetrating; self-revealing, if necessary; critical, if desired. Revealing of
what? You decide. Critical of what? You decide.
Week 7: Oct. 21
READING: Handouts -- selections by Russell Baker, James
Thurber, Calvin Trillin, other humorists.
DUE: 500-word humorous essay.
Week 8: Oct. 28
READING: Handout -- "Hymn"
by Emily Hiestand from The Atlantic.
DUE: Revisions
of 750-word essay on being aware that you wrote for Week 4, Sept. 30. As you
revise, keep in mind this passage from Philip Gerard's Creative Nonfiction: "Revision
is... re-envisioning your work. Stepping back from it in light of what you know
now, what you have written, and determining if you have done what you set out
to do. Just because the piece occurred to you in a certain way and you wrote it
that way doesn't mean that was the only way, or the best way, to do it".
IMPORTANT: This class and the following week's will run from
8:15 to about 9:30 p.m. After that, I'll meet individually with students for
10-15 minute sessions in my office (Room 504) to review progress to date,
discuss any problems, review proposal for the 1,500-word fact/research piece.
Week 9: Nov. 4
READING: TBA/several travel pieces.
DUE: Class
discussion of your idea for a 1,500 word fact/research piece. Discuss why
you're pulled toward this idea, why "readers" will find it
compelling, how you'll research the project, what sort of preliminary research
you've done (who you've talked to, what interviews you've done). The class will
act as a board of editors.
IMPORTANT: This class will run from 8:15-9:30 if I could not meet with every student last week for
individual meetings.
Week 10: Nov. 11
READING: TBA
DUE: Writer's notebooks and 850-word travel piece.
Week 11: Nov. 18
READING: TBA
DUE: 1,500-word fact/research piece.
Week 12: Nov. 25
READING: TBA
Week 13: Dec. 2
READING: TBA
Week 14: Dec. 9
READING: TBA.
DUE: revised 1,500-word fact/research article.
Week 15: Dec. 16
There is NO final exam, but
you are expected to attend this class for general discussion about the course.