PBDS 750
Special Topics: Writing
NOTE: This is representative of the syllabi for this
course. It is not necessarily the syllabus being used in any one semester.
(Topic
Changes from semester to semester.
Here's a sample∞)
THE ZEN OF RELIGION WRITING
Our response to the
attacks of September 11 made it clear how much religion resides at the center
of our nation Ü and of ourselves. The attacks and their aftermath also made
clear how distortions of religion, by those who profess to practice them or
those who are strangers to them, can harm and destroy. This course will help
students appreciate the many faiths in America's religious fabric, as well as
hone their skills so they can write about religion and religious experience
with profound clarity, knowledge and empathy.
"Faith" is not a requisite for this course. Tolerance
and curiosity are. This course will be an excursion into self and into
discipline—the discipline of faith and the discipline of writing. We will be
learning skills, approaches, strategies to writing about religion and faith,
strategies for understanding religion and faith. We will compare religions,
denominations, sects, cults, attempting to understand their beliefs and their
appeal. We will not forego our own beliefs (or lack thereof), but will learn
how to temporarily set these aside while treading in the religious shoes of
another person. None of this will be extraneous to writing, since writing does
not exist in a vacuum, a void, or a narcissistic black hole fueled by ego,
impulse or vanity.
Hopefully, you'll leave this course with an enhanced
appreciation for the possibilities and power of faith to enrich us, even to
frustrate us. You will also hopefully leave with better able to tolerate the
confusion, uncertainty, ambivalence and fear that are an inescapable part of
serious writing—and of seriously trying to come to grips with a galaxy of
religions.
REQUIRED READING:
A New Handbook of
Living Religions, edited by John R.
Hinnells. Penguin Books.
There will be
occasional handouts from me
RECOMMENDED
READING:
Handbook
of Denominations, 11th
edition, Frank S. Mead and Samuel S. Hill. Abingdon Press, Nashville, TN. 2001.
ON RESERVE IN LIBRARY.
Yearbook
of American & Canadian Churches,
edited by Eileen W. Lindner. National Council of Churches of Christ in the USA,
New York. ON RESERVE IN LIBRARY.
How
to Be a Perfect Stranger: A Guide to Etiquette in Other People's Religious
Ceremonies, edited by Arthur J.
Magida. Two volumes. Skylights Paths Publishing, Woodstock, VT. ON RESERVE
IN LIBRARY.
Going
on Faith: Writing as a Spiritual Quest,
edited by William Zinsser. Marlowe and Co., NYC.
The
World's Religions by Huston Smith.
HarperSanFrancisco.
Long
Quiet Highway by Natalie Goldberg.
Bantam Books.
Writing
Down the Bones by Natalie Goldberg.
Bantam Books.
Reporting
& Religion, edited by Benjamin J.
Hubbard. Eagle Books.
Reporting
News About Religion, Judith M.
Buddenbaum. Iowa State University Press.
Elements
of Style by William Strunk and E.B.
White. Allyn & Bacon, 2000.
On
Writing Well by William Zinsser.
HarperCollins, 1998.
If
you come across well-written articles on religion in any publication, please
bring them in for class discussion and let me know at the beginning of the
class that you have something to discuss.
RECOMMENDED
WEBSITES:
www.beliefnet.com -- Spans
all religions. Many resources & articles.
www.fas.harvard.edu/~pluralism/ -- Pluralism Project at Harvard. Access to many
resources; information on efforts around the U.S. to understand other faiths.
WRITING
ASSIGNMENTS:
Keep a writer's journal. A three-ring
binder will work best for this. For each week of the class, write in your
journal two to three ideas that you'd like to develop as articles or even as
books. Each idea should include: the slant you'd take when writing the article
or book, what pulls you toward this idea, how you'd approach the topic, how
you'd research it.
Keep your journal entries brief. I will collect the journals on Nov. 19. Grades
for the journals will be based on the creativity, imagination, effort and
ambition of your ideas.
The journal is
not class notes or reading notes. It is ideas Ü your ideas Ü and is primarily
for your personal use. Do not be overly concerned with neatness. You entries
can be done in handwriting or with a word processor or on an old typewriter you
found in a junkyard. What's important is 1) entries be neat enough so I can
read them; 2) you not spend more time addressing legibility than you do
addressing creativity.
The1,500-word article due December 3 should
concentrate on several visits you've made to a faith not your own Ü to a
mosque, a synagogue, a church, a Friends meeting, etc. In this assignment, you
will concentrate on theology, ritual, rite, liturgy Ü the "mechanics" and the
ideas of faith. But you will make
this come alive by focusing on a particular member of that faith and how he/she
relates to the event/worship/ritual and what meaning it has for them and how it
affects them. You can also bring yourself into the essay: how does any of what
you see/hear/smell/ponder affect you?
Other than the
journal, writing assignments will be given in the number of desired words. The
length of an assignment is not arbitrary, although it is somewhat flexible. For
a 1,500-word assignment, for example, you don't have to hit that magic number
right on the button. On the other hand, don't skimp and write 1,000 words. And
don't write a bloated 2,000 words. A general rule of thumb is that going over
or under an assigned length by 150-200 words is dandy. Anything excessively
above or below that number will be a problem.
Assignments have
specific lengths to give you a feel for a form of writing, for the discipline
involved in it, for your own proclivity for -- and comfort in -- that style.
Don't be seduced by the numbers! The compression necessary when writing a
500-word essay may be as difficult as the discipline and/or research and/or
thinking demanded when taking a 2,500-word essay to full length. Maybe more
difficult.
Assignments should be double-spaced in 12-point
characters. Always use one-inch margins and indent paragraphs. Do not have an
extra space between paragraphs. Those extra spaces disrupt the reading process,
turn each paragraph into an isolated
island
of its own and interrupt the flow of meaning and effect.
REVISIONS:
Most writing assignment can be revised twice. The
grade for the latest revision will replace any previous grades received for
that assignment.
No revision will be accepted unless all previous
versions of that assignment are stapled to it.
The only
revisions which will receive separate grades for the original and the revision
are those due October 15 and Nov. 26.
ORAL
PRESENTATIONS:
Around mid-semester, the class will divide into
different faiths Ü Judaism, Islam, Buddhism, Christianity, Ba'hai, etc. Each
group will make a presentation to the class on November 19 or 26. The
presentation will reflect having immersed yourself in that particular faith
over several weeks. You will be conversant with that faith's theology, rituals,
observances, holidays, etc. That knowledge plus your experiences attending
services and such events as communions, funerals or bar mitzvahs will be the
basis of your presentation.
For your presentation, each of you might discuss a
certain aspect of "your" faith's theology and then talk about a particular
worship event or ritual you observed and how theology undergrids that event or
ritual. You might compare this to other faiths/denominations we've discussed or
with a faith/denomination you're familiar with Ü maybe your own. Also discuss
any writings that profoundly helped you understand "your" faith Ü how did they
help you? how can they help your writing reach the same level of clarity and
understanding?
The same rules apply to the presentation that apply
to your final 1,500-word article: it should not be "dry" and "academic." Talk
about your experiences. Talk about meeting "real-live" Jews, Muslims,
Buddhists, etc. and having heart-to-heart discussions with them about their
faith. Talk about how any of this has affected your own faith or your
(mis)perceptions about another faith.
Since your presentations will occur as you are
researching and writing your 1,500-word article (due Dec. 3), you can use this
as an opportunity to refine your thinking and your perspective on your article.
GRADING
Grades
will be given on every writing assignment:
F
-- for work that does not satisfy in any way the course requirements and/or the
graduate level of this course.
C-,
C, C+ -- for work that barely satisfies the course requirements and/or the
graduate level of this course.
B-,
B, B+ -- good, solid, commendable work.
A-,
A -- work so accomplished, so polished, so skilled that an editor receiving it
would immediately shriek "Eureka!" and sprint down the hall to brag
to colleagues that another Hemingway, Wolfe, Mailer, Capote, McPhee has just
been discovered.
There
is no final exam.
Grades
received for your writing assignments will account for 65 percent of your final
grade; your oral presentation will account for 20 percent; class participation
and attendance will account for 15 percent. Also influencing the final grade
will be your
progress
and improvement as a writer and as a thinker about religion and writing.
Class
participation is not class attendance. Attendance means your are bodily and
mentally present from the beginning to the end of each class. Participation
means you are contributing to the class with comments, insights, readings you
have discovered on your own, etc.
Any
assignment not turned in during the class when it is due will lose half a
letter grade. Assignments more than one week late will lose a full letter
grade.
No
assignment can be e-mailed to me.
Excessive
and repeated tardiness will adversely affect your grade, as will more than two
absences.
PLAGIARISM:
It is illegal and unethical to use someone else's
work without properly crediting the source. If you are not sure whether to credit
a source or to quote or paraphrase or to use original language, please ask me
in advance Ü or err on the side of citing the source you are using. If I
discover you've plagiarized material for this course, I will follow the
university's policy of academic integrity. (See the UB Student handbook for
this policy.) Under that policy, the consequences of plagiarism can include
failing the course and being expelled from the university.
OFFICE HOURS
My
office #, phone # and e-mail address are in the top left corner of the first
page of this syllabus. I'll be in my office from 7-8 p.m. most Mondays and
Tuesdays. I'll accommodate any student who wants to meet with me, but an
appointment is advisable.
Please
call or e-mail to schedule a meeting. If a before- or after-class meeting is
inconvenient for you, I'll try to adjust my schedule -- within reason -- so we
can meet at another time.
THE
WEEKS AHEAD
Note:
This is a rough overview of the semester. Readings, writing assignments, and
class discussions may change as the semester proceeds.
Week 1: Sept. 3
Get
acquainted; general lay of the land; writing and reading assignments for Week
#2
Week 2: Sept. 10
READING:
Handouts on September 11 & the attacks on the Pentagon and the World Trade
Center.
DUE:
750 word essay on you, God, religion, faith. You can take this in any direction
you want Ü your relationship to the faith you were born into, the faith you
left, the faith you are now in, the faith you will never be in. Why you practice a certain religion; why you
don't. What aspect of your faith are important to you; what aren't. What God
is, isn't, can't be, shouldn't be. Is there a God? Make this personal/
philosophical/theological.
Make it clear, passionate, self-critical, God-critical, faith-critical, etc.
Week 3: Sept. 17
Outside
speaker: a Quaker
READING:
Handouts on Quakers.
DUE:
750 words interpreting/comparing handouts last week from Islam, Christianity
and Judaism.
Week 4: Sept. 24
Outside
speaker: a Muslim
READING:
New Handbook of Living Religions,
Chapter Three, "Islam," and a handout -- "Hymn" by Emily Hiestand
from The Atlantic.
DUE:
750-word essay on being
aware. Of what? Of anything. Of sitting as you write. Of the muscles you use --
or don't use -- as you write. Of thinking as you write. Of the flow of your
thoughts: their rising, falling, fading away. Of the scratch of your pen on
paper or the pounding of your keyboard as you bang away. Of the birds or kids
or traffic outside your window. Of the silence outside your window if you live
in the country. Of your resistance to this assignment even as you plow ahead
with this assignment because you know you have to do this assignment.
As you write,
remember these lines from Natalie Goldberg's Long Quiet Highway: The deepest
thing writing taught me was that there was nothing to hold on to. Thoughts
moved quickly. As a writer, I worked hard to grasp them as they flooded through
me, but thoughts moved faster than my hand..... A writer's life is about
examination. What is love, anyway, and sorrow and light? I wasn't ready to
examine these things for their own sake. I was busy examining myself. How do I
get this mind to speak clearly, how do I coordinate it with my hand and pen,
who is a writer, how do I become one?... [At author's readings, I found out
that everyone] wrote differently and had a different schedule. That was great!
It gave me permission to find my own way. It encouraged me to examine myself.
Who was I anyway, who was going to write?
Week 5: Oct. 1
Reading: TBA
DUE: 750 words on going to a Quaker meeting or a
mosque.
Week
6: Oct. 8
Outside speaker: a Buddhist
READING:
New Handbook of Living Religions,
Chapter 8, "Buddhism."
DUE:
TBA
Week 7: Oct. 15
Field
trip to Shambhala meditation center
READING:
TBA
DUE:
Revise any of the assignments for which you have received a grade and comments
from me since the beginning of the semester. That should be the essay on
you/God/religion/faith that was due 9/10, the comparison of texts that was due
9/17, the essay on attending a Quaker meeting that was due 9/24. As you revise,
keep in mind this passage from Philip Gerard's Creative Nonfiction: Revision
is... re-envisioning your work. Stepping back from it in light of what you know
now, what you have written, and determining if you have done what you set out
to do. Just because the piece occurred to you in a certain way and you wrote it
that way doesn't mean that was the only way, or the best way, to do it.
Week
8: Oct. 22
Outside
speaker: a Greek Orthodox priest
READING:
New Handbook of Living Religions,
Chapter 2, "Christianity."
DUE:
750 words about the meditation experience the previous week at the Shambhala
meditation center.
IMPORTANT:
This class will run from 8:15 to about 9:30 p.m. After that, I'll meet
individually with each student for 15-minute sessions in my office (Room 504)
to review progress to date, discuss any problems, review proposal for the
1,500-word final piece.
Week 9: Oct. 29
No class Ü focus on visiting
the faith you are concentrating on.
Week 10: Nov. 5
Class
discussion of your visits to "your" faith.
Week 11: Nov. 12
No class Ü focus on visiting
the faith you are concentrating on.
Week 12: Nov. 19
Class
presentations∞.
DUE:
Turn in your journals.
Week 13: Nov. 26
Class presentations∞∞
DUE: Revision of the first writing assignment Ü the
750-word essay you submitted on Sept. 10 on God, religion, faith. Use the
revision as an opportunity to 1) refine your writing. 2) assess if your
attitude toward God, religion, faith has changed during this course. (NOTE: Its
OK if your attitude has not changed. But if it hasn't, state why not.)
Week
14: Dec. 3
READING:
TBA.
DUE:
1,500-word article.
Week 15: Dec. 10
There
is NO final exam, but you are expected to attend this class for general
discussion about the course.